The text below has 86 words. It doesn't need that many. How many can you
reduce it to, yet keep the essential information?
Read through first. Try to spot which facts are essential, which could be
cut without changing the meaning.
- The research found that the range and quality of sexual health service provision is variable. This research recommends that shared care guidelines, incorporating minimum quality standards of sexual health care, should be developed by an inter-agency group, with representatives from primary care teams/groups and specialist services. A number of issues raised in this research could be considered in the development of these standards.
- A number of training needs for primary care staff were identified. This research recommends that XXX Health Authority facilitate such training.
The research found thatthe range and quality of sexual health service provision is variable. This research recommends thatsharedcare guidelines, incorporating minimum quality standards of sexual health care, should be developed by an inter-agency group,with representatives from primary care teams/groups and specialist services. A number ofissues raised in this research could be considered in the development of these standards.A number oftraining needs for primary care staff were identified.This research recommends that XXX Health Authority facilitate such training.
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Well, our editor thinks they are simply saying:
- Minimum sexual health care standards should be developed, to include this report's recommendations.
- Further training should be provided for primary care staff.
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